Looks pretty good. Really good crease movements, and good post integration. I'd rather go full RVH (you're doing RVH on your blocker side, and VH on your glove), but having a plan and technique is more important than focusing on just one. Without a suction cup mount, some things do get lost and perspective is difficult. But from what I'm seeing, you tend to retreat into the net when you don't need to. Stay out at the top of your crease unless there's a play to the side. I only saw you get up using your left foot. On the few plays where the play went from your right to left, you pushed to slide across when regaining your stance may have been the better option. So instead of getting up with your right foot, which is the direction of play, you just push. It's a hard habit to break. I did it by forcing myself to usre the correct leg whenever I got up, that meant on stoppages and plays where a shot wasn't imminent. And maybe try to stay a little more quiet and centered. You're a little all over the place, which is putting you out of position.
All in all it looks good. Keep up the good work. You almost got that breakaway.